Thriller brainstorm: Rationale: Chene Harris Brain storm: Asylum Characters that I have chosen are a mentally ill patient and a news reporter. I chose the mentally ill patient as one of the characters because he gives off a crazy unfit sense of feeling and us as the audience get more curious as to what he may get up to in the next few scenes. The news reporter being character two was chosen because a news reporter gives off an alert or a curious sense of feeling as to what she may be publishing, especially since the news reporter is on her own in an asylum... I based my scenes inside of an asylum because I feel that an asylum in the middle of the night is quite scary but not too scary for a horror. The asylum also gives off that crazy mental sense of feel. During scene one we start off by listening and watching water drop from a pipe onto the ground from quite a distance away, as the camera moves closer the droplets become more visible and they become louder. As we m...
Hi Chene
ReplyDeleteOverall Score: 16/20
Some really great elements here. Just needed some tidying up to be even more effective.
Sound could have really made more of an impact being big hits at points of big reveals like toby in the boot of the car or the lift opening to reveal body guards.
Overall a good relationship between sound and the visual aspects.
Film title gets lost a bit, too quick and not enough of a feature.
Credits are too fast across the screen, you can't even read it.
Some great flow and continuity though, well done on the editing.