Representation essay “when they see us”

Chené Harris
Media studies
Representation Essay
“When they see us”






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  1. Hi Chene

    Total: 31/50

    Terminology: 6/10
    Argument/ Analysis: 13/20
    Examples: 12/20

    You were on point for many of the main points you had written down. Just make sure to include all 4 tech areas and all the DETAIL from what you observe in each shot. You spoke about some of the detail but mentioning things like the use of mirror in the beginning, the lighting for mise-en-scene, editing techniques used (flashbacks/ montage) etc, there are some details that aren't here.

    Also, you are on the right track with representation and groups you identify are being represented. Keep statements strong and concise and then fill in the rest of your paragraph with examples from the text. So not too much waffle and trying to explain it, just lots of exact detail and analysis from the text.

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