rough edit // the close shave // pt1
Rough Edit // The Close Shave
CCR question plan
Chené Harris Media studies CCR question planing The triller genre in particular is one of the most popular and well enjoyed genres. This movie genre had placed on of my top 5 most loved/ preferred genres out of 8; by having this preferred genre in my top 5 I would most likely aim to distribute and fund my film through crowd-funding, hoping that the audience I show/advertise my short friends to would enjoy watching thrillers. I personally wouldn’t really want to send a YouTube or vevo link to our to the crowds that would fund my film - just because of accounts that may be hacked and or pirated. I would however send out various parts of the short film; for example how the strange man stares at the little girl (Amberley) for a while and then ends up abducting her - this would also draw the audiences attention to my film and therefore would most likely like to fund my film. I personally think a good way to distribute my short film would be to distribute it thr...
Overall score - 6/10
ReplyDelete- 180' Rule (2)
- Shot-reverse-shot (0)
- Match on action (2)
- Sequence & continuity (2)
- Title (0)
I'm looking forward to seeing you piece this together with some creative thought. Think about your transitions, about how to make this as full of suspense as possible! What music are you thinking of putting in here? Think about asoun effects that can also add to the unnerving tone and feel. You want to show the audience that this is a scary place, you need to make us feel like the guy in the chair is unsafe.
I would suggest spending some more time showing the razor Zach is washing. Try to find more close-ups of each shot you're doing.
Shot-reverse-shot needs to be more obvious. What you have now doesn't really cut it.
Title - be intentional about where you place it, what font you use and how it moves on and off the screen.
After effect - make sure you use at least one in your final edit.