rough edit // the close shave // pt1

  

Rough Edit // The Close Shave







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  1. Overall score - 6/10
    - 180' Rule (2)
    - Shot-reverse-shot (0)
    - Match on action (2)
    - Sequence & continuity (2)
    - Title (0)

    I'm looking forward to seeing you piece this together with some creative thought. Think about your transitions, about how to make this as full of suspense as possible! What music are you thinking of putting in here? Think about asoun effects that can also add to the unnerving tone and feel. You want to show the audience that this is a scary place, you need to make us feel like the guy in the chair is unsafe.
    I would suggest spending some more time showing the razor Zach is washing. Try to find more close-ups of each shot you're doing.
    Shot-reverse-shot needs to be more obvious. What you have now doesn't really cut it.
    Title - be intentional about where you place it, what font you use and how it moves on and off the screen.
    After effect - make sure you use at least one in your final edit.

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