Overall score - 6/10 - 180' Rule (2) - Shot-reverse-shot (0) - Match on action (2) - Sequence & continuity (2) - Title (0)
I'm looking forward to seeing you piece this together with some creative thought. Think about your transitions, about how to make this as full of suspense as possible! What music are you thinking of putting in here? Think about asoun effects that can also add to the unnerving tone and feel. You want to show the audience that this is a scary place, you need to make us feel like the guy in the chair is unsafe. I would suggest spending some more time showing the razor Zach is washing. Try to find more close-ups of each shot you're doing. Shot-reverse-shot needs to be more obvious. What you have now doesn't really cut it. Title - be intentional about where you place it, what font you use and how it moves on and off the screen. After effect - make sure you use at least one in your final edit.
Opening Sequences What's the purpose of opening Sequences? The purpose of an opening sequence is for it to establish the mood and visual character of a film. It is also used to introduce the viewer to all or some of the elements such as Characters, locations, plot, themes and narrative. What's the difference between opening credits and a title sequence? In some films, the title sequence is preceded by a cold open. The opening credits help establish the setting and the tone of the program. What Techniques be employed in an opening sequence? Quick cuts - portray lots of information to the audience as well as create suspense to the thriller genre. Opening sequence to show setting. This clearly gives information to the audience and can create more suspense clearly based on what genre the film has been set in. No music playing during an opening sequence can give the audience a sense that there is some sort of suspense that is showing within the fil...
Overall score - 6/10
ReplyDelete- 180' Rule (2)
- Shot-reverse-shot (0)
- Match on action (2)
- Sequence & continuity (2)
- Title (0)
I'm looking forward to seeing you piece this together with some creative thought. Think about your transitions, about how to make this as full of suspense as possible! What music are you thinking of putting in here? Think about asoun effects that can also add to the unnerving tone and feel. You want to show the audience that this is a scary place, you need to make us feel like the guy in the chair is unsafe.
I would suggest spending some more time showing the razor Zach is washing. Try to find more close-ups of each shot you're doing.
Shot-reverse-shot needs to be more obvious. What you have now doesn't really cut it.
Title - be intentional about where you place it, what font you use and how it moves on and off the screen.
After effect - make sure you use at least one in your final edit.