This is much better! Well done on trying to go for depth and quantity in your research assignment.
I want to see you continue to push yourself. Write notes and get some good points and then put it in your own words to help you understand what it is you're saying. You had some really good points but you would have gotten even higher marks if you had used some specific examples and also explained some of the bullet points of conventions so I know you actually understood what they were.
The supernatural thriller explanation needed more than 'it was an American comic'. It may have originated as that and that could be a good point of interest, but what is the sub-genre? How would you describe it?
Overall you did a great job putting it into a slideshow.
Thriller brainstorm: Rationale: Chene Harris Brain storm: Asylum Characters that I have chosen are a mentally ill patient and a news reporter. I chose the mentally ill patient as one of the characters because he gives off a crazy unfit sense of feeling and us as the audience get more curious as to what he may get up to in the next few scenes. The news reporter being character two was chosen because a news reporter gives off an alert or a curious sense of feeling as to what she may be publishing, especially since the news reporter is on her own in an asylum... I based my scenes inside of an asylum because I feel that an asylum in the middle of the night is quite scary but not too scary for a horror. The asylum also gives off that crazy mental sense of feel. During scene one we start off by listening and watching water drop from a pipe onto the ground from quite a distance away, as the camera moves closer the droplets become more visible and they become louder. As we m...
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This is much better! Well done on trying to go for depth and quantity in your research assignment.
I want to see you continue to push yourself. Write notes and get some good points and then put it in your own words to help you understand what it is you're saying. You had some really good points but you would have gotten even higher marks if you had used some specific examples and also explained some of the bullet points of conventions so I know you actually understood what they were.
The supernatural thriller explanation needed more than 'it was an American comic'. It may have originated as that and that could be a good point of interest, but what is the sub-genre? How would you describe it?
Overall you did a great job putting it into a slideshow.